Author's note: This sort of feelings doesn't always occur, but when it does, it can be torture. It may not be the most wonderful language, and it's definitely not a perfect poem [I'm still trying to get the hang of writing poems >_<]
But it comes from the heart.
I dedicate this poem to all those who feel neglected. By family, friends, spouses, and lovers. And i hope this will help quite a portion of our society this day to stop in their tracks, look behind them, and see the ones who have been waiting to be seen.
Invisible Me
***
Your shadow...
Always in sight...
But rarely in contact.
Struggling in silence...
But the distance...
Never nearer.
Waning faith...
Upset love...
Adds up to depression.
Never-ending chase...
Ever flowing tears...
But forever... Watching your rear.
But it comes from the heart.
I dedicate this poem to all those who feel neglected. By family, friends, spouses, and lovers. And i hope this will help quite a portion of our society this day to stop in their tracks, look behind them, and see the ones who have been waiting to be seen.
Invisible Me
***
Your shadow...
Always in sight...
But rarely in contact.
Struggling in silence...
But the distance...
Never nearer.
Waning faith...
Upset love...
Adds up to depression.
Never-ending chase...
Ever flowing tears...
But forever... Watching your rear.
7 Comments:
Actually, in all honesty, I don't really like the usage of too many '...'s in a poem =o=
But that's just personal opinion =o=
Overall it's okay @@
Were you emo-ing at that time? O.o
Sounds very emo in conjunction to Firesky's World Angry Day and World Misery day ! I like the watching your rear.... sounds wrong ! Lol. Quite ok la poem. needs polishing up. ! Keep it up !
Leonard
Firesky: No, i wasn't emo-ing. But i was a few days back. jz tot of posting dat day ^^lll ya ok i'll try to leave out all the dots @_@
Leonard: You are way too sensitive =O= but thanks for teh honest opinion ^^ I appreciate it ^^
ouch...sounds so sad and depressing...
anyway to those with those emo...get out of it...cheer up and get on with your life...
life is too short to be bogged down with such emo...
anyway quite a good write...
keep on writing :)
Aww.. sad poems makes me sad. But the last part, "watching your rear" was a bit funny.. *hee* :D
Ah...haha...ha ^^llllllll yes alot of ppl say so X_________X my vocab not strong enough rofl @_@ but thanks for your comment ^o^ oh btw i love your new template ^^ looks great~
i linked ya!~
nice blog! drop by mine sumtimes? =)
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